Which Revision Would Best Help Expand The Ideas In The Excerpt?

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Which Revision Would Best Help Expand The Ideas In The Excerpt?

over the ship's rail, his pipe slips from his hands. Acting on impulse, he reaches for the falling object, loses his balance, and falls into the dark water below. After this, Rainsford struggles to stay afloat and swim to the island in the distance. It is a difficult task, but after much effort, he lands on the shores. Rainsford collapses and falls into a deep sleep. Which revision would best help expand the ideas in the excerpt?
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adding more details about the struggle Rainsford experiences as he swims to the shore

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